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The Experience of Moving Often Helped Rory Crofton Choose Brandeis

As part of an as-told-to essay for College Game Plan's How I Got In series, Brandeis University sophomore Rory Crofton, 19 , reflects on his college journey.

From

Victoria, Canada

My short & sweet

History-loving world traveler who finds joy in volunteering.

My applying experience

My parents are international school teachers, so we've moved around a fair amount. I was living in Bosnia when I applied for university.

It was a bit of a different application process for me, just because I didn't get to go see any of the schools, or talk to anybody. So there was that added layer of uncertainty about where I was applying.

Why I chose Brandeis

I'm a double major in history and American Studies. I was definitely focused on schools that had good departments in terms my interests, but also had an emphasis on extracurricular activities. Being super close to Boston, arguably one of the most historically significant cities in the U.S. was a fantastic bonus, but finding schools that emphasized volunteerism as well was a big priority for me.

Image: Rory Crofton
Rory's advice: "On applications, try to present your true self." Courtesy Rory Crofton

My essay

I applied using the common app, and my personal statement was about growing up and hopping around from place to place, with my changing perceptions of what home is to me. My hometown is on the west coast of Canada, but when I go back "home," I feel almost as much like a tourist as I do a native, because I haven't spent as much time there. So I wrote about having a sense of home as something that changes depending on where you are.

My high school life

One of my high schools offered AP courses, so I made sure to take those, and at another school I took an extra year to do the International Baccalaureate program. I challenged myself academically, but I also spent my time doing community service.

I did a lot of volunteer work with the national parks service, giving tours, working at the visitors' center, and also at lots of other museums and historic sites. I really enjoy history, so I was able to combine my academic interest with volunteer work.

Image: Rory Crofton
Courtesy Rory Crofton

My parents' style

Having had this experience of moving around so much, I was used to being told, "this is where we're living; this is where we're going; you're going to go school here."

So when it came to college, I was at a loss at what to do with all this freedom of choice. My parents sat down with me and helped me go through some places, trying to find ones that stood out, and [Brandeis] seemed like a good fit.

My advice

On applications, try to present your true self. Don't think that admissions people reading your application are necessarily looking for a particular answer. They're looking at the bigger picture. Sell yourself, of course, but don't write things just to try to impress them.

When you're picking out schools, don't be afraid to go out of your comfort zone in terms of finding a school that might be a little bit further away from home. Look for a school that might challenge you in ways that you might not have known.